FRIENDS or FOES
Why did I get so close?
now I cant take the blows.
There are people all around
wonder if they are friends or foes.
I cry, I shout, I scream.
I wish it was all a dream.
I wonder when I am all by my own
"have I always walked alone?"
I wonder whether they are friends or foes
trying to find answers but nobody knows
there are many things that life shows
keep your enemies closer, friends just close.
Tears roll down my eyes
They thought i lost but i rise
To revive what they had slain
To fight the world again
i can see a group walking towards me
they r here again, they have come to slay.
i am strong, i beat them. i look at them and say
"Everyday is not a blue moon day."
Why did I get so close?
now I cant take the blows.
There are people all around
wonder if they are friends or foes.
I cry, I shout, I scream.
I wish it was all a dream.
I wonder when I am all by my own
"have I always walked alone?"
I wonder whether they are friends or foes
trying to find answers but nobody knows
there are many things that life shows
keep your enemies closer, friends just close.
Tears roll down my eyes
They thought i lost but i rise
To revive what they had slain
To fight the world again
i can see a group walking towards me
they r here again, they have come to slay.
i am strong, i beat them. i look at them and say
"Everyday is not a blue moon day."
13 comments:
AWWWWWESOME..... a complete masterpiece ,dude u write so lucratively!...I can understand the feelings that u have thrown into this poem ....i almost could imagine myself in your position.... u write ur heart out man ...wonderful....keep it up
good one!!! u used the wordz perfectly! keep writing bro!!... cheerzz ;-)
master-piece ... bows...
it was thought provoking. friends sure are either with our behind our tears...
neverthless, they are our friends...
it always is on us, how we rise , inspite of all forces against us...
@chundae
thnx buddy..
@dethsoul
ya u keep inspiring..lollz
@sim
ur appreciations means a lot
@amit
usual u..:)
I have no idea what to say, which is why I didn't comment in the first place.
@varun
thnx to show tht i forced u to write a comment.
hey amazing poem..
captures hte dilemma of life..
there are very few lucky ppl , who can distinctly identify friedns and foes ....
The flow is commendable :) Great job!!! :)
simply superb...
Violent poet ki re tu?
good one! :D
@ugri
good to see great people visit my blog..
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